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I'm not mad.
I'm not angry
Or in your face.
I'm just sad,
Feeling crazy
And a little misplaced.

I don't belong here.
Thoughts grow thicker.
Mind is racing,
Going nowhere.
Feeling sicker--
Sick of pacing.

Back and forth,
Where am I going?
Where's my heart at?
Tired of searching for true north.
Wishing, wondering, never knowing.
Walking blindly up to bat.

Is this my life?
I feel passed by.
Seeking foolish gain
In a knife.
Bleeding out, afraid to cry--
To feel alive through my pain.

Feeling drained.
It's all a scam.
Look what I've done.
I'm ashamed
Of who I am,
And what I've become.
This is actually called Ashamed of the Girl in the Mirror, but apparently that's too long of a title. I also thought about calling it Seeking Solace, but I didn't think anyone would get that.

Anywho, this is just a short little poem I wrote last night because the first 6 lines were dancing in my mind and wouldn't let me sleep till I wrote them down. I've also become such a free verse person lately, so I wanted to write a rhymer for old times sake. I like the fact that most of them are imperfect rhymes, sorta rustic.

But yea I like this one...
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QuillOfOmega Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student Writer
ooh im always looking forward to your poetry. its so.. deep.

The rhyming you used didn't seem rhymy, but it gave it your poem a beat... or flow... or movement.

Yeah... movement through your thoughts.
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xXForeverLostSoulXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Thank you so much, you make me feel important :huggle:

Yea, I wanted the rhyme to be a bit off, that was intentional, I think it's because I've grown to like free verse so much lately...

Anyway, thanks so much again, always nice to have another's input :D
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QuillOfOmega Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Student Writer
yeah, i knew the rhyming style was intentional. I almost never rhyme in my poetry, because rhyming restricts your vocabulary and "to restrict your vocabulary is to restrict your imagination" (English teacher said that all the time)

np.
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xXForeverLostSoulXx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
haha funny

I do however like the face that when you write rhymers you have to really think about your wording. When I used to write only rhymers I would take a couple hours to write stuff because getting it to sound justright took time and it made me think about rhyming and communcating a feeling.

Anyway, very interesting... ;)
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XVinfeX Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ugh I hate it when that happens. Thats like every night for me but I'm to lazy to get up and do something about it so I end up forgetting xD

I like this one as well man good job :D
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xXForeverLostSoulXx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
Thanks man XD
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XVinfeX Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
;)
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